Alive with a life

A gift to be always grateful for is ‘Life’..
Feel blessed..even in this cruel times, you are still alive.
Yes you are tired!
You are stressed!
You are confused in figuring out the best!
But look a while…after all these, still you have a shelter where the tired you can rest.

You are stuck,
You are bored,
You are left with many places unexplored!
But look a while..after all these,at least two meals for yourself, still you can afford.

Slow down for a minute,look back places where we can’t even imagine surviving a day.
Look at those lil kids, who wanna study but can’t
Look at those women who want sanitation, do job and dress up, but can’t
Look at those men who wanna drive private cars to their office but can’t!
Look at those aged ones who deserves proper medication but can’t!
That’s the time,
When privilege hits me and you on the face and make us realize, how prerogative our life is.

Life is tough
But a blessing.
Life’s irrational at times
But having one is a bliss.
Life takes tests
But, rewards us with our deserving bests.

Life’s easy to give up..
But exploring it is inestimable!
Ups and downs keeps us alive..
Or else ,
You’re simply alive..without a life!

33 Comments

  1. vaniheart says:

    The last stanza is such a hit β€β€πŸ‘πŸ‘
    Great take πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much Vani! ❀️

      Much love! Stay happy ✨

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  2. Sunita Patil says:

    Awesome❀️

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much Sunita ❀️!

      Stay happy! Much love ✨

      Like

  3. Rageshree says:

    So true and well written!:)

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much!
      So glad you loved it! ❀️

      Stay happy

      Liked by 1 person

  4. Olivia Ava says:

    Wonderful❀️😊

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much ❀️!
      Glad u liked it 😊

      Like

      1. Bishal Debnath says:

        U r improving like crazy⚑

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      2. ahiricreates says:

        Arreyyy! Thank you Soo much 🀧!! For always helping me out with honest feedbacks!
        Bishal boro thanks bishal 🀣

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  5. Sometimes we take things for granted and forget to count our blessings. Beautifully written, Ahiri ❀️

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      True ..πŸ™‚

      Thank you so much Shweta for taking out time to read and to drop your valuable comments! Means a lot! ❀️

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      1. It was my pleasure. I’m glad that I came across your blog today 😊

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      2. ahiricreates says:

        Thank God you came across my blog today🀣 and it resulted in me finding such a beautiful blog of yours! 😊

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      3. Oh that’s so sweet of you. I’m so glad that we were about to connect too. Thank you so much, Akriti. I hope you have a great day

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  6. This poem is absolutely beautiful. I’m very impressed, you’re extremely gifted with the pen. This is a good reminder that life and merely being alive is a gift. We should all stop and appreciate the beauty of nature and to be thankful for all of the good in our lives every once in a while. Very true – ups and downs are what make life, what define us, and what help us to become more well-rounded people ❀

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much for these kind words!❀️ I’m really glad you liked it! You’re such a sweet soul! ❀️

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  7. shadawss shadawss says:

    πŸ˜‘πŸ‘Œ

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      β€οΈπŸ™

      Like

      1. shadawss shadawss says:

        Good work

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      2. ahiricreates says:

        Thank you very much

        Like

      3. shadawss shadawss says:

        πŸ€—

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  8. AB says:

    I guess I needed to read something like this. That last part, especially the last line, was really powerful. Loved it ❀❀

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Means a lot that you felt like this β€οΈπŸ™! Thank you so much for reading and dropping your very kind valuable comment

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      1. AB says:

        You’re most welcome πŸ™‚

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  9. cheriewhite says:

    Beautiful and inspiring! I needed to read this! ❀

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ahiricreates says:

      I’m glad you liked it and it made you feel something! Means a lot ❀️

      Thank you so muchh

      Liked by 1 person

      1. cheriewhite says:

        You’re very welcome. πŸ™‚

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  10. Ashish kumar says:

    Indeed, life without ups and downs is a utopia… You have beautifully conveyed a message too in this awesome poem… very well penned…

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much sir! Means a lott πŸ™β€οΈ!

      Liked by 1 person

  11. Hagne says:

    This is so powerful. Felt like you had me in mind while writing this.πŸ™‚ The last stanza communicated a lot. Keep writing, dear friend!πŸ€—πŸ’ž And thanks for sharing this.

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thanks a lottt!! I’m so happy you could relate it to you and feel it! Means a lot to me❀️❀️!

      Lots of love and good wishes to you dear! Keep writing! β€οΈπŸ€—

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      1. Hagne says:

        You’re welcome.
        Thank you.πŸ€—πŸ’–πŸ’ž

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