Unspoken

Speaks with hope in lips
Being replied with excited voice on ears.
Both wanted hearing the hearts..
But ‘understanding‘ the words were what they feared .
Fear of being judged.
Fear of being unknown.
And…. fear of being eternally known .

Time seemed like a sloth.
But the hearts..
They raced like young horse!
Oh which speed should be followed?
Will following one lead to messing up it all?

Rushing storms of thoughts, poking ’em both!
And eyes filled with questions seeking for a route to get flowed.

Lips uttered less..
Lips, uttered less…from both the ends..
That suddenly, smile took the chance!
And eyes followed, by brightening at their best!

Time rushed as if a horse was freed from harness!
And heart took a deep breath as if it met absolutely what it wanted!

What reversed the role for heart and time?
What’s the magic spell?
….Who knows
Maybe unspoken were the words ..
That spoke the best.

19 Comments

  1. Abir Chowdhury says:

    🥺💙…
    “Supremeth commandment thou speak”
    It’s too beautiful to add anything else. I guess I would the “unspoken” pervade here….✨

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Damnn!! 🥺💙 ThankYou so much abir!! ✨

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Abir Chowdhury says:

        You’re so welcome 💙

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    2. Abir Chowdhury says:

      would let* 😂

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  2. I’m glad that you are back, I really missed your words here. There are few blogger’s work that I wait for, you are among them. Your poem always puts a smile on my face. Keep sharing and thanks for doing this.

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      That’s really kind of you! Such words always put a smile on the face of the one who writes!
      ThankYou so much for being so welcoming with my posts always!
      Means a lot ✨

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      1. Have a peaceful day ahead, keep smiling

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  3. Arobrata says:

    Ki shundor… 💝✨

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  4. Arobrata says:

    Ki shundor… 💝✨

    Liked by 2 people

    1. ahiricreates says:

      ThankYou soo muchh🤧♥️

      Like

  5. KK says:

    Smile is the key to communication. Smile is infectious, spreads from one to another. Your post has done your bit. Let others do theirs.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. ahiricreates says:

      ThankYou so much 🙏♥️!
      Means a lot coming from u sir ✨

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Beautiful and deep Ahiri. Silence speaks. 🙏🏻♥️

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      ThankYou so much Amber!! ♥️
      And true,silence do speak ✨

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Lokesh Sastya says:

    There is a chemistry between two people, only they know how to communicate together.

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  8. Jeff Flesch says:

    How lovely this is, Ahiri. I love the ending. 💞

    Liked by 2 people

    1. ahiricreates says:

      ThankYou soo much!! I’m so glad you loved it!!
      Means a lot ♥️

      Like

  9. usfman says:

    You should share this poem for anyone you know who’s loneliness seem to overcome them/ For here’s a strategy to remedy one’s inability to express to others in words their true feelings.

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