Sky: Deciding

With stars framing a dreamy sky
And sun bidding a bye,
Some starts being there self
Whereas some sleeps for seeing again the daylight.

Eyes looks for the starry nights
As it longs to rain,
Eyes looks for starry nights,
As it’s tired hiding the pain.
They look for starry nights,
As they longs being in absolute personal..personal frame.


Mind wants a daylight
It wants so to divert the self.
Mind wants a daylight
It wants so to make practicality a giant and the starry night an elf .
Mind wants a daylight
To be a machine with blood and sweat again …
To secure the roof above where at night the eyes could rain again


And the soul?
It’s in a fix…will go with whatever brings all the peace

17 Comments

  1. Abir Chowdhury says:

    Absolutely amazing πŸ’™βœ¨
    To let a shelter reign the tears some eyes carry is the most beautiful phenomenon a night can carry πŸ₯€

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      ThankYou so much abir!! πŸ’™
      Wow! How beautifully said ✨ very very true!
      ThankYou for the lovely words! πŸ₯Ί

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      1. Abir Chowdhury says:

        You deserve all of it πŸ’™

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  2. I think somewhere between noon and night will be good for soul 😁
    A very beautifully written poem, missing this on WP.
    You made my day, cause I’m happy to read it.

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Well.. if the soul thinks so..it’s great 😊!
      ThankYou for taking out time and for reading this!
      And Thankyou so much for this kind words Devang! Such comments means a lot and encourages more to create ✨

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      1. Well, I was hyped to read your latest work (although there’s a lot that I still want to read from you)
        I checked in the morning when I saw your comment if there’s anything new from you and as soon as I realised that you have published something, I got super excited to read it.
        Have a peaceful day and remember to smile.

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      2. ahiricreates says:

        That’s so sweet of youuu!!
        ThankYou so much for always being so encouraging and for always reading my works!! It always motivates to write more!! 😭β™₯️
        Stay happy and keep writing!! ✨

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  3. Peace is what the mind wants in the end….beautifully penned Ahiri πŸ™‚

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Very true 😌✨!
      ThankYou so much for reading and for dropping the lovely comment radhika! Means a lot β™₯️

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  4. Priti says:

    Beautiful poem touchy ! Thank you ❀️☺️

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Means a lot coming from u! Thankyou so muchh β™₯️
      Such comments inspires to write more ✨

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      1. Priti says:

        Keep writing ☺️

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  5. KK says:

    Peace and tranquility are the need of the hour. And your poem touches this point so thoughtfully. A good piece πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      ThankYou so much sir for the kind words!!
      Glad you read it and liked it πŸ™βœ¨

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  6. Arobrata says:

    Very very much beautiful poem ✨✨
    U are such a talented Writer πŸ’ keep it up!

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thanks a lottt yaarβ™₯️!

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  7. Lokesh Sastya says:

    Reading other comments, I think I’m the only person who fails to understand this poem. It does not look (or feel) natural to me.

    I want to highlight two lines which you also highlighted β€”

    β€œTo secure the roof above where at night the eyes could rain again”.

    The poem is little unclear for me…but the intentions look good…and it has a progressive approach.

    Good for your studies, Ahiri.
    Live a healthy and happy life. 😁✌️

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