Choice

As the sky meets the sea
Sun bids bye to moon
Thought one will meet the one ..
Will meet the one, very very soon .

One who’s a budding architect of life..wanna meet the one..
Who actually is the palace of dreams one wants to own.

🍂

The roads seemed rough
Well some were also pretty smooth.
As if, some were the waves who gets hit by the rocks at shore
And some were the cottony clouds gladly floating up in a blue floor.

Hold on, hold on to the journey..
It’s gonna determine.. gonna determine,
Whether you’ll be the cloud or that wave that hits the rock hard and sound.

If given the choice,
I’ll go for the waves..
‘Cos I wanna see how those pseudo lovers react, when I get hit by the rocks on face ..
And also what they do, when I rise higher exactly after that!

7 Comments

  1. Lokesh Sastya says:

    The choice is ours. And a wave could be a better option than a stone.

    I’m little unclear about the poem. Can you please briefly describe it, Ahiri?

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Well, it’s not something very well written.. was randomly scribbling and after a moment I don’t now I just posted it.. you know..some posts which we just want to put it up and we do? It’s something like that 🤣!
      Well, all I was scribbling is, the one here is a person growing..a dreamer.. and the other ‘one’ is the dream or the feat first one wanna achieve..
      The road is rough! And at places it’s smooth too.. and those 2 roads I compared one with the waves that comes with glory bt then gets hit on the rocks at sea shore ..
      And the other with freely floating clouds .. who smoothly roams around..

      And if I’m given a choice to choose one of them.. I’ll go with being the waves which gets hit on the rocks.. as though they get hurt and shattered with that hit .. bt after that they sprinkle up to great heights! And I wanna choose that so that I can experience myself and also, See the reaction of those ppl when I’m down being hit by the rocks..and also when I’m up and rising in heights exactly after that fall .. reaction of those who infront showed they “cared” for me and all bt they were actually not

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      1. Lokesh Sastya says:

        So you are looking at the real side of your dreams. I wish you good luck.

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  2. I like the 2 paths!
    One is smooth, another is a rough ride!!
    Great poem, best wishes 🙂

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Indeed!
      ThankYou so much for visiting the blog and for reading my works🥺
      Means a lot!!

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  3. eunice says:

    The first two lines of the first stanza are interesting.

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      ThankYou so much ♥️

      Like

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