Alone?

Lost in the blue sky
Lost on the muds
Lost within the people
Had lost some trusts .

Closed the eyes,
Saw someone staring at me
Questioned I , who are you and why?
Those eyes questioned back:
“You sure you’re alone?”
– I didn’t knew what to reply..

Walking away from my bed, the eyes merged into the mirror.
Got up and I sat on the bed ,
Looked into the mirror..
Could see, my reflection staring at me back.
Moving exactly how I am
Piercing looks into my eyes as if saying,
If not anyone I AM HAVING YOUR BACK!

27 Comments

  1. Ashish kumar says:

    Waw. Incredible writing.. very well penned…

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much sir🙌❤️!
      Your comments always inspires me🙏
      Glad to get your views on my posts after I came back from a break 🙏

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      1. Ashish kumar says:

        It’s always a pleasure to go through your posts and good to see you back after a break… 💯👌

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  2. Beautifully expressed…

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much!
      Means a lot ✨

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  3. AB says:

    Wow, this was really good! Loved it ❤

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ahiricreates says:

      Yaayy🙌 thank you so much!!
      Means a lot!! ❤️

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  4. vaniheart says:

    Wow 👌 👏
    Beautifully expressed..
    Loved it

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much Vani!! ❤️
      Means a lot✨

      Like

  5. Abir Chowdhury says:

    Truly a prodigious piece of expression…✨
    Keep on putting this unaltered point of view again and again…❤️

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you Sooo muchh abir✨
      Your feedbacks have always been a great help to me! Means a lot ❤️

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  6. KK says:

    Wow! So beautiful lines 👌

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much sir 🙏

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  7. Well penned Ahiri!

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much radhika!! Means a lot!!

      Like

  8. Nice to read your words! Happy, Happy New Year!

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Hey! Thank you so much!! ❤️✨
      And yes, a very happy new year to you too, wish you a happy, safe and healthy year filled with reasons to celebrate ahead

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      1. Welcome! 💚 Thanks a lot!!!

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  9. vermavkv says:

    Beautiful.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thanks a lot sir 🙏

      Like

  10. Commendable piece of work😊

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much ❤️

      Liked by 1 person

  11. Lokesh Sastya says:

    Can you write a post on Bangla or Hindi? (I don’t Bangla, so please provide a translation.)

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Sure!! I’m keeping this request on my note!! Will b writing something on bangla or Hindi nxt.. and if it’s in bangla I’ll provide translation too❤️

      It’ll be up by 27th

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  12. Lokesh Sastya says:

    post in Bangla or Hindi

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  13. So well written!!
    A very smooth read!!
    This poem works as a spark for those who think that everything is over and they are all alone, it’s telling them; get up, you are not alone!!

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