Veil

In the world of angels as well as thugs..
I let the veil covering my life, fall apart .


The world my life saw till now had a happy pink net in front of the eyes, which now…… had fallen!!
Letting life actually be a life and see the ‘world’
World- that’s not always ‘an all good fairytale’.
Instead, a world, which had villains, witches, troughs, cries and loneliness…
But, was bravely fought by the goodness, angels, flights, love and togetherness.
Sometimes winning, sometimes… Smashed with the losses .

Realized, ‘only good’ makes me monotonous ..
‘Only bad’ drenches me with stress.
The veil that showed me only the good.. have dropped down .
The veil that showed me only the good.. have finally dropped down ..
Bringing me out of my zone.
Hitting me with the facts saying
“See, everyone’s life’s happening.. not necessarily in a good way always.. but IT IS happening” .

Thought, the veil was putting me away from my reality check..
Started picturizing the veil as a veillain(villain)
Untill I realized, it was necessary too.. up to a certain age..
Just like the warmth of a hen to it’s baby egg untill it hatches .

🍁

P.S, Share the experience of your coming out from a veil

12 Comments

  1. Lokesh Sastya says:

    Hi, I like your poem. And I wish you write more. 🙂

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Hey! Thank you so much!
      Was out of blogging and everything for last few months due to exams.. now I’m back.. definitely will write more..
      Just need the support of amazing bloggers like you

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  2. Jeff Flesch says:

    What a great analogy for the clarity that comes with the removal of illusion. It’s true, life is full of both good and evil, and the veil was there for a reason, as you write. Now removed, we can accept kife just as it is, and was meant to be. Great post, Ahiri! ❤️❤️

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Very true sir.. life is full of good and evil and veil was there for a reason!
      So so glad you liked the post!
      Thanks for always being so supportive ✨🙏

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      1. Jeff Flesch says:

        Indeed! You’re welcome, Ahiri. Always! I loved it! ✨💫🙏

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  3. AB says:

    This is very well written and expressed! Loved this ❤

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much AB! Means a lot!
      Glad you loved this❤️

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  4. Ashish kumar says:

    Reality check so well expressed in this poem… sometimes veil too had its importance in life which you have beautifully explained in this poem…

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      Thank you so much for your valuable comment sir🙌
      Glad you liked it!
      Means a lot

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  5. Wonderfully penned…..loved your words..

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    1. ahiricreates says:

      I’m so glad you loved it! Thanks a lott🙏❤️

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  6. This “veil” definitely take us away from the reality….. Sometimes we forget what’s even happening around us. It makes us blind, it stops us from doing the right thing or make us ignore the bad around us.
    Also, as you said only good makes me monotonous, only bad drenches me with stress, so true!!!!
    Great share AhiriCreates 🙂

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