
Thirst for achievement increased
Resulting in speed of finding the right track .
Failed bunch of times
And then stepped back .
Consoled, “You are in desert and the thirst is just leading you to a mirage..
There’s nothing which is giving at least half of the efforts back”
Ignoring the thirst, was leaving the desert..
A strong wind blew
After that all I knew,
It wasn’t a desert, just my eyes were caged with sand.
Closed the eyes and opened back.
Saw, there’s no mirage..
Just the lake of my achievement is far
But I’m still on the right track.
Wow 👏😮 very well expressed
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Thank you so much Vaniii❤️🤗❤️
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Something changed …but don’t know what
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And you’re successful to make me think again bishal 😶
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Amazing!! I loved it…🧡
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Thank you so much ❤️
Glad you liked it 🤗
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(just my eyes were caged with sand) 👏True, and relatable to me as I said in my “Inner Faults” – Its the legs that are dirt and not the immaculate house that illusions the house is dirty.
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Very very true!! 😌
Yes I read inner faults and I genuinely loved that!
Glad u liked my writing! Thanks for your valuable comment 🤗means a lot
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Amen to that!! Yes indeed ❤😊
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Amen😌
Thank you so much for reading and dropping your kind comment ❤️🙏
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Lovely. 🤗❤️
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Oh thank you so much Jeff❤️🤗
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You’re most welcome, my dear friend. Always. ❤🤗
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Not Mirage is a powerful poem. It makes me strong. 👊
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Oh thank you so much Lokesh!! Means a lot coming from youu seriously ❤️
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Loved reading this!
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Thank you so much for reading ❤️
Glad you liked it! ✨
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Welcome so much! 🙂 It was super good!
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❤️means a lot!
Stay happy ✨
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You expressed something I’ve felt so often, something we often feel. Amazing!
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Means a lot that you could relate some feeling of yours with my writing ❤️
Thank you Soo much for reading and for leaving this kind valuable comment 🤗
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😊😊
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Excellent poem… The setbacks leading to success well expressed in this poem…
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Thank you so much sir!! 🙏 Humbled!
P.S, so sorry for being late to reply! Was busy with some exams 😪
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No worries…. Hope your exams went well…
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Beautiful writing with an amazing picture❤️
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Thank you So much ❤️❤️
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